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Hmm... 3am maybe no one will notice this. :ninja:

God so very weird, no I don't know why it's so odd. yes I'm sober.
I really wanted to call this "F*ckery" but I wasn't sure if I'm allowed. so I named it after a Ludo song.
this is for the Lilly's August vexel/vector contest.
ok, people nothing to see here keep moving.:police:

Oh and thanks Manda.:hug:

Circuit board courtesy of :iconarchetype-stock:

Critiques


:iconchewedkandi:
As original as a portrait can be in the vexel genre, what people see as an "average" vexel portrait, this is indeed something more different in style which is good for self development. Good show!
This being said, there is something I'm not completely "right" to me which would otherwise make this a glowing success.
Technically it's very sound and the use of gradients works well... however I'm unsure of the colours used, especially for the background, I don't feel they match the main focus of the piece... the female. This is why I have rated technique as 4/5.
I think it would have worked better with a more pastel background in all honesty, although to be fair maybe a bold background such as this is what is adding to it's more original edge in the portrait genre.
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3 out of 4 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconlilvdzwan:
Sorry! I looked!! :P

She looks very HighTech!! I really like what you did with the neck and how you gave the skin coloured shading!
:iconmirabel:
Noo!:shakefist:
no looking, look into the shine light please. *neuralizer*

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I like pretending I know what I'm doing. :slow:
*vexelove
:iconjussta:
Is she like.. a chick from the future? Niiice :eyes:

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READ.GALLERY.DESCRIPTIONS!
:iconmirabel:
Um...ok yeah. :eyes:

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I like pretending I know what I'm doing. :slow:
*vexelove
:iconshebid:
what's wrong with us? Do we NEVER sleep o_o; East coast plz. Anyways, I think it turned out great, the shirt looks way better, and also.. i'm in love with the metal on her neck ;;

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#TheCandyHole - Where all your dreams come true.
:iconmirabel:
It's my motto, "Sleep is for the weak!".
Thanks I do too, but I wouldn't have tried it if you didn't suggest it.

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I like pretending I know what I'm doing. :slow:
*vexelove
:iconshebid:
sleep IS for the weak. I'm just kinda sick of skipping sleep entirely one night, then the next night I sleep until like.. 4pm the next day -_-

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:iconsicknessofthemind:
One of the best songs ever....

Amazing work too, totally loving it, and so, it has been faved....

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:iconmirabel:
You're awful, I love you. ;)

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I like pretending I know what I'm doing. :slow:
*vexelove

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